Friday, October 16, 2009

The Perfect Kiss






















Which is when the world stopped turning.
Which is when the birds fell silent.
Which is when the clouds all breathed in at the same time.
Which is when lies became truth.
Which is when pain became love.
Which is when fires burned blue.
Which is when red flowers bloomed.
Which is when snow fell.
Which is when ice became water.
Which is when the universe smiled.
Which is when the sunshine and the moonlight met.
Which is when gravity gave up the ghost.
Which is when the air became thick.
Which is when people screamed on the edges of cliffs.
Which is when every guitar in the world strummed the same three chords over and over.
Which is when the dead rolled over and wished to live again.
Which is when the song turned itself up.
Which is when aliens on other worlds looked up into the heavens and gasped.
When is when hurricanes and storms and floods swept through us.
Which is when tears fell from willows at the beauty of it all.
Which is when riots and madness chased themselves through the streets.
Which is when millions of glasses committed suicide, throwing themselves from kitchen cupboards.
Which is when angels were filled with envy.
Which is when vampires threw back their heads and howled.
Which is when skin crawled.

Which is when we were watching TV on a couch.

Which is when you were in my arms and I was in your mouth.

36 comments:

  1. which is when my head was in your chest and i can hear your rapid heart beat

    which is when our hands clasped together whilst cruising al qhusais road

    which is when you said that my words evoked such profound feelings that you have to know me

    which is when you vanished without a trace and left me half dead

    i am missing you so much it hurts

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  2. which is when my head was in your chest and i can hear your rapid heart beat

    which is when our hands clasped together whilst cruising al qhusais road

    which is when you said that my words evoked such profound feelings that you have to know me

    which is when you vanished without a trace and left me half dead

    i am missing you so much it hurts

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  3. which is when we stood at your bus stop waiting for you to go

    which is when the traffic lights smeared across wet tarmac

    which is when i held you for the first time

    which is when i looked into your eyes and changed

    Thanks

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  4. which is when no one else tried to ruin it with their own cheap imitation comments.

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  5. which is when my head was in your chest and i can hear your rapid heart beat

    which is when our hands clasped together whilst cruising al qhusais road

    which is when you said that my words evoked such profound feelings that you have to know me

    which is when you vanished without a trace and left me half dead

    i am missing you so much it hurts



    which is when....i am dying to see you go and wished you knew i was waiting for you the whole time....

    i was here..im still here..i miss you too..=(

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  6. "...millions of glasses committed suicide, throwing themselves from kitchen cupboards."

    Great line, great post, great photo.
    Now, create a great weekend, Sir Thomas and Sir Ellis. ;-)

    <3
    E

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  7. I..honestly do not know how to explain how this post makes me feel. It was so perfect for this moment, adding to my desire, and it's left me dumbfounded. Thankyouthankyouthankyou. This, I believe, is my new favourite.

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  8. whoa...dialogue in the comments! I want to see how this one ends! (grabs popcorn)

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  9. love the line "which is when the sunshine and the moonlight met" so amazing just to picture that. All the imagry that i was seeing while reading this just blew me away.

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  10. which is when i actually closed my eyes.

    which is when i felt your breath hot against my cheek.

    which is when we stopped in the middle of the road just to kiss.

    which is when you took me driving just to hold my hand.

    which is before you broke my heart.

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  11. this is my all time favorite.

    thank you so much.

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  12. five years ago today i had my first kiss. so fitting this is at a time when i'm looking to what kisses may come in the future.

    i've learnt to be okay without you.

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  13. which is when the kiss was the final destination and we simply enjoyed the journey within each others arms....

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  14. beautiful.
    i am tearing up.
    thank you for bringing up such wonderful memories.

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  15. I'm scared I might take you for granted.

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  16. ..and i do wanna love you..
    you know i really do...

    which is why i'm still holdin' on until you come around..

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  17. just the ending of this one, that last line.

    dear god, yes. you hit it right on the head every single time.

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  18. I love this. I randomly stumbled upon you on twitter, and I'm happy I did :)

    x

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  19. the last lines hold true for me
    i remember you
    i will always love you

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  20. Which is when we were laying on the bed.
    Which is when you made my world perfect.

    Perfect timing, thank you for always getting inside my head and making me feel better.
    Making me feel like im not the only one on this Earth with a heart.
    A true, beautiful, pure heart.

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  21. Which is a moment I'm still waiting for.

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  22. which is moments before that moment you said you didn't love me.

    im still waiting for a yes, by the way.

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  23. Sunshine and moonlight, how illuminating!

    OML, how I love you*

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  24. I loved, loved, loved.
    I wanted write like you.

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  25. Which is when we drifted away in sleep and continued kissing in our dreams.

    I love this.

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  26. which is when you realized what I never told you

    which is when you realized what you never told yourself

    which is when we loved one another

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  27. wow.
    this is so incredible that i don't quite know what to say.
    amazing.
    beautiful.
    awesome.

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  28. this made me cry..

    would it be better to have never experienced this at all,
    to have experienced it and lost it?

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  29. I dont know how this makes me feel, its so beautifully written but the last line gets to me in a way that I don't know how to explain. Your writing is magical.

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  30. I thought this was beautiful, but going on for too long. And then the last line made me catch my breath. That last line.

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  31. which is when I remember you and I can now smile...

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  32. I feel like like these words were taken from my mouth before I knew they were there and someone else wrote them.

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