Wednesday, April 8, 2009

The Metal Starts To Twist

I'm lost and looking for the sky, for moving parts and a place that doesn't rust. For wheels that burn and a world that turns. For a road that phantom cars still drive down while lovers long lost feel wind that's blown too long in silver hair. You are the only map I know.

9 comments:

  1. wow, i'm speechless

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  2. i won't mind getting lost with you...

    "the words are beautiful.. thanks!"

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  3. this was incredibly beautiful.
    thank you <3

    "you are my map" i'll try saying this to somebody it sounds nice :)

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  4. This is breathtaking...I want to memorize it so I can carry it with me all of the time.

    Thank you.

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  5. Omg, beautifully written & exactly what I need now. Thanks Iain, you're awesome

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  6. I adore the way you use language. You write beautifully. Thank you for that.

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  7. Beautiful
    Also ironic in a sense because I had my first driving lesson today :)

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  8. It feels like I am constantly at a Crossroads in my life.

    I stop. Look left. Look right. Look left again. Move on.

    Oscar Wilde - “A map of the world that does not include Utopia is not worth glancing at.”

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  9. This is the first time I've felt like you are, in fact, writing this for me. thank you so much.

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