Tuesday, August 11, 2009

The Slight Pinch

You and I could collide, like atoms in some scientist's wet dream. We could start a new universe together. We could mix like a disease. And if we do, I hope we never get better.

23 comments:

  1. No antidote shall ever heal us.

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  2. to The One:

    "death is waiting
    hurts are blistering
    fluids are flowing
    walls are caving in
    past is fading out
    stakes are rising
    roads are unwinding
    thoughts are crossing
    brains are [censored]
    lord isn't looking
    hands are holding
    minds are opening
    chapters are closing
    suns are shining
    switches are flipping
    [censored]
    patterns are repeating
    pupils are [censored]
    moons are aligning
    times are changing
    dreams are shaping
    you and me are
    starting something"

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  3. my favourite of all

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  4. I never wanted to be healed

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  5. you want me to come up to you and say I GOTTA HAVE YOU IN MY LIFE OR ELSE I'LL DIE?..

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  6. when you pass by at me earlier...
    i was a little bit puzzled..
    as where i should put myself up..
    should i just really put these behind and
    say i'm ok(damn it I'M NOT,NEVER WILL) or will i stay and prove it to you that i am a freak and can't live without you???....

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  7. cotton seed: Your comment made me laugh so hard. If it were me, I'd like that very much. :)

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  8. yeah, who wouldn't like that...

    cotoon seed: was your comment aimed at the post or a previous comment?

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  9. *Come slowly, Eden!

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  10. And our disease would end the world. And I've done that before. ~_^

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  12. I gotta tell you..

    after this weekend, this blog has unfolded into brand new meanings.

    I look forward to reading it in this new state.

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  13. :) nice poem anonymous and of course this blog's great.

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  14. Amazing amazing writing. I can really relate to this.

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  15. You always know what to say! Thank you for writing this for me!

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  16. I can't erase this from my memory.

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  17. One of my favorites.

    You should write movies.

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