Thursday, March 3, 2011

The Lying Tree






















The least you could do, is uncross your heart. Unhope to die.

41 comments:

  1. I am still here. <3

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  2. But how do I uncross my heart?
    How do i unhope to die?

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  3. Thank you for the beautiful poetry, as always.

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  4. Live with your heart wide open. Me.

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  5. PS I'll uncross my heart so I can breathe. Loving every breath.

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  6. :(

    give me time. i need time. i won't uncross my heart, or unhope to die! i believe in someday. and in US.

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  7. you make it sound so easy. if only it was that simple!

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  8. "Appear as you are,
    Be as you appear."

    "Close both eyes...to see with the other eye."

    ''The minute I heard my first love story, I started looking for you, not knowing how blind that was. Lovers don't finally meet somewhere. They're in each other all along.''

    -- Maulana Jalalu'ddin Rumi

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  9. ilove your writings!! i wish i have your brain..

    I had been copying you and not giving you credit! hahahaha, im sure im not the only one :)

    peace!! keep on writing

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  10. This was much needed.

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  11. ill do so when i can no longer feel this needle in my eye.

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  12. your writings take my breath away sometimes. you're amazing.

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  13. agreed :)
    agreed on this statement :)
    in any case u have to lose hope

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  14. I believe in someday. I believe in US too. <3

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  15. Patience is a challenging "virtue" but you know what? It's going to be okay. I'll survive. Take all the time you need. I trust you emphatically. And besides, when it comes to US I'm in no hurry, really. The foundation is only the first step in building a structure that will likely last far beyond our time on this planet.
    :-) XO <3

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  16. I'm so sorry.
    I never meant to hurt you.

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  17. But where would I be without your empty promises? Still in your arms while my heart swam in lies.

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  18. True love comes to those who believe and I believe in you. Believe in me.

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  19. I love him!!!!!!
    I will tell him one day, cross my heart, hope to die.

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  20. You are waiting for something that is never going to happen. Love, Me.

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  21. my heart is cealed

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  22. my heart is cealed

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  23. Beautiful post!

    Lauren
    www.laurensthoughts.com

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  24. Do I have the strength of a stone? Am I mad of bronze? Life is not hopeless. But abundant.

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  25. I've been reading your posts for so long, this one gets to me the most. Thank you.

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  26. Why not? I've already broken all promises to you. There's no use hoping for something I won't get back.

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  27. Everything you said was a lie...

    YOU crossed my heart, now I hope to die...

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  28. Nothing is better than when you lay with me.

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  29. You don't lie to me. I will never lie to you. The truth is I see you everywhere. In everything. I always have. Me.

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  30. Hello! I was just wondering about the placement of these commas. I often feel they're in a place I wouldn't normally put them. So is it a stylistic choice of the author?

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  31. Yes, I go quite crazy with the commas, they're a stylistic choice. They indicate where I breathe.

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  32. I love you just the way you are. Real love never judges nor strays. Always with me always with you. Don;t ever let go. I love you with all of my heart, Thanks for everything. Me.

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  33. Thank you for letting us comment again. I know it takes up a lot of your time and its a lot of effort but I, we all are truly grateful for this small way to interact with you. Bask in the nourishing rays of your love for humanity and give us some hope that someone out there cares.
    All my love to you

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  34. God I love this. Your blog means so much. It makes me wonder if your just like me. If the world hasn't been so pretty.

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