I need you to understand something. I wrote this for you. I wrote this for you and only you. Everyone else who reads it, doesn’t get it. They may think they get it, but they don’t. This is the sign you’ve been looking for.
You were meant to read these words.
Wednesday, October 5, 2011
The Burial Chamber
You die when you stop feeling. I will live forever.
i cannot say the same. the me i currently am will not live forever, because parts constantly grow numb and fall away as new piece take seed. such is growing. so maybe i will live forever, just not the way i am right now, for i am constantly changing.
Feeling, dreaming, believing, loving.... eternally. They say God weeps when he sees the painful things we do. There is nothing He can do, it's all in You.
Hi, I'm probably not the person you're looking for, I don't think I could ever meet a person like you and easily forget him or her. I don't pretend your posts were written for me, but I do admire your bravery and your view on things. It's incredible how you can see things that most don't and how you sometimes say just what I needed to hear, I'm sorry of it makes you feel less of a poet but you have to know something... you're not as alone as you believe yourself to be. And if you are, then the scary truth is... we all are.
Well, I'm still the first one to comment. HA!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful one liner :)
ReplyDeleteLike it !!
This gave me a painshock in my chest and it really hurted my feelings.
ReplyDeletePerhaps it is still hurting me.
This felt like a punch to the gut.
ReplyDeleteI needed it.
Thank you.
Then I will be reborn.
ReplyDeletethis really hit home, thank you so much
ReplyDeleteWill you really want to live forever, after having known what it was like to live and feel forever?
ReplyDeleteBut sometimes I wish forever would end today, sometimes it hurts too much.
ReplyDeletei cannot say the same. the me i currently am will not live forever, because parts constantly grow numb and fall away as new piece take seed. such is growing. so maybe i will live forever, just not the way i am right now, for i am constantly changing.
ReplyDeleteYou die when you stop feeling.. then I have been dead for a long time TT TT
ReplyDeleteSpot on!
ReplyDeleteI love it - short, simple AND honest.
Feelings don't just go away...
ReplyDeleteFeeling, dreaming, believing, loving.... eternally. They say God weeps when he sees the painful things we do. There is nothing He can do, it's all in You.
ReplyDeleteSometimes the feeling feels to much to live with. Somesay you have to die to discover eternal life.
ReplyDeleteSometimes the feeling feels to much to live with. Somesay you have to die to discover eternal life.
ReplyDeleteYou have crushed me,
ReplyDeleteeven if I do not feel love
I have other feelings
I will not be destroyed
and love will find me again.
Thanks for getting me through this year. Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteforever and always stuck in the burial chamber, people don't fall in love with people who are missing pieces.
ReplyDeleteI've been dead for years.
ReplyDeleteWho cares. All that matters is the middle. Me.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteSome people will never have lived...so sad when you can't do anything about it.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's the feelings that kill you....
ReplyDeleteBroken
that is just awesome and so deep lines...:) I loved it...keep writing..:)
ReplyDeletesimple yet perfect.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Iain :)
ReplyDeleteHi, I'm probably not the person you're looking for, I don't think I could ever meet a person like you and easily forget him or her. I don't pretend your posts were written for me, but I do admire your bravery and your view on things. It's incredible how you can see things that most don't and how you sometimes say just what I needed to hear, I'm sorry of it makes you feel less of a poet but you have to know something... you're not as alone as you believe yourself to be. And if you are, then the scary truth is... we all are.
ReplyDeletebeautiful :)
ReplyDelete