Thursday, September 15, 2011

The Wind Almost Took You













When you have done the things you've done.

When I tell you I'll meet you at the door. And you tell me you're sorry. That I have no reason left to worry.

When you hit the ground in a most peculiar way. And I tell you to wait. And you tell me I'll be sorry. That you have no reason left to worry.

When I am more than you can take, just give me back.

31 comments:

Luna said...

When I am more than you can take, just give me back.

wow I feel those words wrap around my heart...no words only feelings thank you

Anonymous said...

I am sorry but no matter how much it hurts to fall each and every time I cannot bring myself to give back what has become an essential part of my life. And my selfishness worries me regardless.

So I get up. I brush myself off. And I continue to wait for the light that is you. It seems my patience must be endless.

Because you are worth the wait. You are worth it all to me.

Anonymous said...

When you have done the things that you've done, all I can do is worry. Your words are haunting and beautiful yet I see no deeds to suggest you are sorry.

Your less beautiful words have foreshadowed my hitting the ground in most peculiar way. And I tell you now you will have reason to be sorry if it comes to bear.

Your actions are more than I can take. I've given you back to fate. You are filled with a depth of hate in this life - a hate and disregard for me, yourself and others, that gives me no reason to stay, to wait for you, for you to meet me at the door to tell me you are sorry; how sorry you really are. Sorry indeed. Even if you did, how could I ever believe what you say.

Your words, even in kindness, are nothing more than part of a peculiar pattern of abuse. It is more than I can take. You are more than I can take, Machiavelli.

Actions are everything.
Make a choice.
Not for me.
Not for us.
For yourself.

Rishika Sharma said...

:)

Anonymous said...

Thistle and Thorns?
The punishment of Adam...
Your sins could have not possibly been of that magnitude...

Randeep said...

good one.

Anonymous said...

What sayeth tho? What sayeth you in response?

Love always, hope to tell you in person.

That's what I've been shooting for down here.

Lisa

Just a lovesick girl, who still remembers her name.

Thank you to the team, production, locations, cast, and crew. When we meet up, it'll be awesome and rad. I don't hate the player nor the game;~) you guys did superior. Well done!!

Anonymous said...

Why isn't this posting??

Swell, ring my bell. Somehow.

Thanks to all.

With luv.

Lisa

sheisiris said...

Who should I give you back to? Not the wind. Or the abstractions of life. There are some things worth fighting for to one's last breath. You are one of them.

WomanInLove said...

"Give me back"..thats right!

Anonymous said...

Is this about someone killing themselves because of cheating?

The Dreamer said...

If I have to shred myself away just so you'll notice me, then I don't want you noticing me. I'd rather be whole and alone, then bloody and with you.

Anjoo said...

:) beautiful :)

Anonymous said...

Why my dear, do you know this about me?

Big Mark 243 said...

I could have used these words in a recent conversation I had... I can almost see the club with the bar empty and everyone readying to close for the night.

Yup... these words would have fit that scene... but instead I was left to my own awkward devices and you can just about imagine how that turned out..!

Anonymous said...

Whatever you think of me is none of my business. People judge you by your actions but they judge themselves by their intention. Its selfish and we are all born this way.

Anonymous said...

It did.
You are right 'bout that mate.
But I recaptured my place by faith.
I'm back on track.

Anonymous said...

How do you justify your intentions?

cartographerofyourhair said...

I don't want to be more than you can take. I want you to hold me tightest when I struggle to be free. I want you to love me always because I love you always. For better and worse.

Anonymous said...

You can use the word "hate" all you want, its just a mirror of YOU. The FACT is that you never knew ME.

"Let my heart go!" - Metallica

Anonymous said...

Five years have gone by so fast.

This person said...

Whenever, is fine, really.

It's not like somebody else needs me right not.

~ Lyzz ~ said...

so sweet...i hope someday, i can write like this, use the english language like you all...

Aasiyah said...

and i cried. :'(

becomingherself said...

beautiful final line. Wonderful imagery as always (words and pictures).

Lizzy said...

It's reassuring to know someone can understand.Even if you don't, your words do.
Thanks for that.

Quin said...

***When I am more than you can take, just give me back***

Most genuine words I have read in a while, thanks for that!!!

Anonymous said...

I dont know how to justify my intention. How do you justify your intention? Bad things happen, just accept them, accept that some things that aint supposed to be. There aint no explainations except that GOD dont allow it

Anonymous said...

Is there, perhaps, somewhere I can return myself?
I've had enough of me.

Anonymous said...

Somewhere you can you return yourself? Come home.

Anonymous said...

When I am more than you can take...just give ME back. :(