Wednesday, October 5, 2011

The Burial Chamber















You die when you stop feeling. I will live forever.

28 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well, I'm still the first one to comment. HA!

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

Beautiful one liner :)
Like it !!

Anonymous said...

This gave me a painshock in my chest and it really hurted my feelings.
Perhaps it is still hurting me.

Anonymous said...

This felt like a punch to the gut.

I needed it.

Thank you.

Anonymous said...

Then I will be reborn.

Angela said...

this really hit home, thank you so much

This person said...

Will you really want to live forever, after having known what it was like to live and feel forever?

kimberly anne said...

But sometimes I wish forever would end today, sometimes it hurts too much.

FeverDream said...

i cannot say the same. the me i currently am will not live forever, because parts constantly grow numb and fall away as new piece take seed. such is growing. so maybe i will live forever, just not the way i am right now, for i am constantly changing.

Iam said...

You die when you stop feeling.. then I have been dead for a long time TT TT

Prixie said...

Spot on!

I love it - short, simple AND honest.

Dreamer said...

Feelings don't just go away...

zonedin said...

Feeling, dreaming, believing, loving.... eternally. They say God weeps when he sees the painful things we do. There is nothing He can do, it's all in You.

Whatever said...

Sometimes the feeling feels to much to live with. Somesay you have to die to discover eternal life.

Whatever said...

Sometimes the feeling feels to much to live with. Somesay you have to die to discover eternal life.

Anonymous said...

You have crushed me,
even if I do not feel love
I have other feelings
I will not be destroyed
and love will find me again.

Anonymous said...

Thanks for getting me through this year. Thank you so much.

iamthelostwanderer said...

forever and always stuck in the burial chamber, people don't fall in love with people who are missing pieces.

Anonymous said...

I've been dead for years.

Anonymous said...

Who cares. All that matters is the middle. Me.

sewa elf said...

Very nice, thanks for sharing.

Anonymous said...

Some people will never have lived...so sad when you can't do anything about it.

Anonymous said...

Sometimes it's the feelings that kill you....

Broken

Anjoo said...

that is just awesome and so deep lines...:) I loved it...keep writing..:)

The Inconvenience said...

simple yet perfect.

Just another guy said...

Thank you, Iain :)

Anonymous said...

Hi, I'm probably not the person you're looking for, I don't think I could ever meet a person like you and easily forget him or her. I don't pretend your posts were written for me, but I do admire your bravery and your view on things. It's incredible how you can see things that most don't and how you sometimes say just what I needed to hear, I'm sorry of it makes you feel less of a poet but you have to know something... you're not as alone as you believe yourself to be. And if you are, then the scary truth is... we all are.

Ansaria said...

beautiful :)