Monday, February 6, 2012

The Tides Goes Out Like The Air In Your Lungs

And now?

Star the night.

I'll night the stars.

And now?

Breathe my breath.

I'll breath your breathing.

And now?

Speak under the water.

I'll water this speaking.

And now?

Until you are still.

I will always be still.


And now.


Berry said...

until forever.

But you should know that forever means the forever that I mean right now. In this moment.

Anonymous said...

what a beautiful post, you touched my heart

I am breathing your breath
for now

kerry lillian said...

i'll water this speaking.

this is gorgeous.
that line reminds me of the nationals lyric, "“i’ve been draggin’ around from the end of your coat for two weeks, everywhere you go is swirling, everything you say has water under it”

but i think you are over the water not under it. you are the speaking water.

FeverDream said...

and now, i wish to erase everything you've done. i cannot bear to live by your side at such an immense distance any longer.

Rakhi said...
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Brittany said...

Beautiful. As always.

klara said...

This is the most confusing entry until now. You seem to have acquired a more abstract style...

Anonymous said...

The moon moves the tides.

Anonymous said...

It is still night. I will always be here.

Anonymous said...

Thank you.

This post kind of saved my life for the fifth (to whatever count)th time. Your words always ring true. Please, always be here for me when I need you the most.

Anonymous said...

A new moon leading the way.

Anonymous said...

and now. and forever. we are but a breath apart. and now. my heart beats with yours. and now. and forever.

Anonymous said...

This is the last thing I'll ever get to write you. For once I'm grateful for the time difference. I've been so unfair, demanding you be here for me. Forgetting you and all your own needs. Forgive me, please. My desperation made me greedy and my mourning made me blind. I wish you the very best. I will miss the way I could dialogue with you, my whispers to you. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to do this so far and I'm genuinely happy for your success. I wish you, and only you, the very best.