Friday, October 16, 2009

The Perfect Kiss






















Which is when the world stopped turning.
Which is when the birds fell silent.
Which is when the clouds all breathed in at the same time.
Which is when lies became truth.
Which is when pain became love.
Which is when fires burned blue.
Which is when red flowers bloomed.
Which is when snow fell.
Which is when ice became water.
Which is when the universe smiled.
Which is when the sunshine and the moonlight met.
Which is when gravity gave up the ghost.
Which is when the air became thick.
Which is when people screamed on the edges of cliffs.
Which is when every guitar in the world strummed the same three chords over and over.
Which is when the dead rolled over and wished to live again.
Which is when the song turned itself up.
Which is when aliens on other worlds looked up into the heavens and gasped.
When is when hurricanes and storms and floods swept through us.
Which is when tears fell from willows at the beauty of it all.
Which is when riots and madness chased themselves through the streets.
Which is when millions of glasses committed suicide, throwing themselves from kitchen cupboards.
Which is when angels were filled with envy.
Which is when vampires threw back their heads and howled.
Which is when skin crawled.

Which is when we were watching TV on a couch.

Which is when you were in my arms and I was in your mouth.

36 comments:

Anonymous said...

which is when my head was in your chest and i can hear your rapid heart beat

which is when our hands clasped together whilst cruising al qhusais road

which is when you said that my words evoked such profound feelings that you have to know me

which is when you vanished without a trace and left me half dead

i am missing you so much it hurts

Anonymous said...

which is when my head was in your chest and i can hear your rapid heart beat

which is when our hands clasped together whilst cruising al qhusais road

which is when you said that my words evoked such profound feelings that you have to know me

which is when you vanished without a trace and left me half dead

i am missing you so much it hurts

Anonymous said...

which is when we stood at your bus stop waiting for you to go

which is when the traffic lights smeared across wet tarmac

which is when i held you for the first time

which is when i looked into your eyes and changed

Thanks

Anonymous said...

which is when no one else tried to ruin it with their own cheap imitation comments.

ds.Iz.M3 said...

which is when my head was in your chest and i can hear your rapid heart beat

which is when our hands clasped together whilst cruising al qhusais road

which is when you said that my words evoked such profound feelings that you have to know me

which is when you vanished without a trace and left me half dead

i am missing you so much it hurts



which is when....i am dying to see you go and wished you knew i was waiting for you the whole time....

i was here..im still here..i miss you too..=(

misplacedfriend said...

"...millions of glasses committed suicide, throwing themselves from kitchen cupboards."

Great line, great post, great photo.
Now, create a great weekend, Sir Thomas and Sir Ellis. ;-)

<3
E

Anonymous said...

I..honestly do not know how to explain how this post makes me feel. It was so perfect for this moment, adding to my desire, and it's left me dumbfounded. Thankyouthankyouthankyou. This, I believe, is my new favourite.

vox caecus said...

whoa...dialogue in the comments! I want to see how this one ends! (grabs popcorn)

Anonymous said...

love the line "which is when the sunshine and the moonlight met" so amazing just to picture that. All the imagry that i was seeing while reading this just blew me away.

Anonymous said...

which is when i actually closed my eyes.

which is when i felt your breath hot against my cheek.

which is when we stopped in the middle of the road just to kiss.

which is when you took me driving just to hold my hand.

which is before you broke my heart.

Anonymous said...

this is my all time favorite.

thank you so much.

Anonymous said...

five years ago today i had my first kiss. so fitting this is at a time when i'm looking to what kisses may come in the future.

i've learnt to be okay without you.

Shandra E...*the misses said...

which is when the kiss was the final destination and we simply enjoyed the journey within each others arms....

louu said...

i think youre amazing.

HC said...

beautiful.
i am tearing up.
thank you for bringing up such wonderful memories.

Taina said...

I'm scared I might take you for granted.

Anonymous said...

..and i do wanna love you..
you know i really do...

which is why i'm still holdin' on until you come around..

Laurel said...

just the ending of this one, that last line.

dear god, yes. you hit it right on the head every single time.

مى said...

I love this. I randomly stumbled upon you on twitter, and I'm happy I did :)

x

Anonymous said...

the last lines hold true for me
i remember you
i will always love you

Rebecca said...

Which is when we were laying on the bed.
Which is when you made my world perfect.

Perfect timing, thank you for always getting inside my head and making me feel better.
Making me feel like im not the only one on this Earth with a heart.
A true, beautiful, pure heart.

t said...

Which is a moment I'm still waiting for.

Anonymous said...

which is moments before that moment you said you didn't love me.

im still waiting for a yes, by the way.

Farah Rosni said...

:)

Anonymous said...

Sunshine and moonlight, how illuminating!

OML, how I love you*

Ana Luiza. said...

I loved, loved, loved.
I wanted write like you.

The Dreamer said...

Which is when we drifted away in sleep and continued kissing in our dreams.

I love this.

Lilee said...

beautiful post and photo!

Lauren said...

simply beautiful.

Anonymous said...

which is when you realized what I never told you

which is when you realized what you never told yourself

which is when we loved one another

Aella said...

wow.
this is so incredible that i don't quite know what to say.
amazing.
beautiful.
awesome.

Anonymous said...

this made me cry..

would it be better to have never experienced this at all,
to have experienced it and lost it?

Kathryn said...

I dont know how this makes me feel, its so beautifully written but the last line gets to me in a way that I don't know how to explain. Your writing is magical.

Anonymous said...

I thought this was beautiful, but going on for too long. And then the last line made me catch my breath. That last line.

EL said...

which is when I remember you and I can now smile...

Gabrielle said...

I feel like like these words were taken from my mouth before I knew they were there and someone else wrote them.