Tuesday, November 29, 2011

The Time Served

This one is about how music gets ruined by the people you're no longer with.

This one counts seconds between moments.

This one desperately dresses wounds with logical statements.

This one only makes sense to the person who says it, until someone else, understands.

This one is here just to fill all the space that's left.

This is one you hear everyday.

This one is six words long.

This one, hates the last one.

This, is the sentence you still haunt.


Anonymous said...

Five words long.

hatchie said...

certain memories are rekindled each time i hear our song. it hurts.

Anonymous said...

Hmmmm..., thinking. :(

Anonymous said...

You know what I love about this? I can read it over and over again, and it gets better every time.

FeverDream said...

this one made me realize that all those things i thought, were right.
this one helps me fall asleep at night without needing to cry.
this one proved that i should never second guess myself.
this one still hears "i think we need to talk." ringing loudly in her ears even months after the moment has passed.
and this one no longer needs to look deep down to realize that it's one thing to be a pretty face, but it's another entirely to be a beautiful soul.


Anonymous said...

in every statement there is an intriguing reason behind it :)
well written :)

Berry said...

This one knows that we no longer "need to talk". I get that you won't get it. I'm ok with that.

This one has 6 new words: I am ok without you now.

This one, should be for those that survived, and lived to tell the tale.

Anonymous said...

even reading these is ruined, because we shared them.

shadow said...

this is true such as everything in which your mind has made you type on to this screen your posts all of them are amazing each with there own hidden stories of personal struggle and strong will to overcome .... these are such words on which my mind contemplates every night wondering waiting .......i do not know why but i feel you understand of my doubts and concerns ..... thank you