Tuesday, September 8, 2009

The Series Of Collisions










In case you touch me by accident. In case you don't on purpose. More hope than heaven (more sadness than soil).

16 comments:

kimberly anne said...

eff. my. life.

he touched me on purpose, but it purposefully meant nothing.

he doesn't avoid touching me, because he doesn't know how it kills me.

he doesn't accidentally touch me, because he doesn't care.

i love you.

Anonymous said...

i love you, too.

and you.

and you.

and you.

Anonymous said...

I don't think he touches me by accident. And when he does I always get the wrong idea...even though I know he doesn't mean it in that way.


I wish things were easier. And like they were 7 months ago.

Anonymous said...

I wish you would, on purpose. Or notice, when you do it by accident.

I can feel it. Can you?

N.R said...

watch out in case there's a train behind you.

Tessie said...

I just want to let you know that I am in love with your writing.

misplacedfriend said...

Some say it's sad.
I disagree.

In my mind this simply means wishing for the touch/approval, and the apprehensive hope of the unknown. Being excited, but second guessing yourself.

Then again, that's why Iain's writing is so beautiful...it means so many things to all of us. ;-)

Amazing.
<3 E

vonyd said...

You touched my heart and I know you didn't mean it. (Or maybe you did:)

Anonymous said...

I remember when we were touching.

But she was on his other side, and she pulled him back to her.

Mynnie. said...

my life simplified. in 3 sentences.
daym. haha.

Anonymous said...

I guess... life's under no obligation to give us what we expect.

When we are tied to our expectations we usually miss what's happening...life, that is.

HC said...

I would give anything just for you to be able to touch me again! PLEASE.

Marlyse said...

Dear Person,

I wish you would notice when I touch you on purpose.

The thing that hurts me the most is how indifferent you are.

Please remember me. It will be so hard to forget after we graduate.

I love you.

The Prog Press said...

This reminds me of e.e. cummings. Well done, may I ask if he was an influence on this post?

Me said...

He's a huge influence on me, generally.

Anonymous said...

Thinking of you. Miss you. Love you x